No the paragraph is really great. I would just like to suggest to put in on a subpage in the xen namespace. I find shorter pages much better because you can find information much quicker. If you are searching for something and use the search function the headline will directly lead you to the right place. You can easier navigate the pages. Especially on mobile devices. And of course the wiki allows us to use links to reference to other pages of which we should make heavy use.

-Michael

On Thu, 2015-02-19 at 22:44 -0600, R. W. Rodolico wrote:

I have added a discussion of paravirt vs HVM under http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/virtualization/xen/start

If you will tell me what you would like tightened up, I will be happy to try. I know I am overly verbose.

Rod

On 02/19/2015 07:23 PM, Michael Tremer wrote:

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Hi Rod,

this is a great read. You are sometimes getting a bit too much into detail so that the articles get a bit long. The structure however makes up for that a bit. The most important information is right at the top and you know where to go to.

I move the articles around a bit and fixed the headlines.

On Wed, 2015-02-18 at 01:16 -0600, R. W. Rodolico wrote:

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I have created a whole section on virtualization. It is all in English (sorry).

If you will start at: http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/start and click on the Virtualization entry (bottom entry), I would appreciate any comments on it. I intend to collect the other virtualization articles into this one container.

Markus, I would love to see your article and do what I can to translate it. I have a friend who speaks/reads/writes German (I don't know how well), and I can work out some of it.

Well enough for that. I guess Google translate will also help to get the jist out of it for you.

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Rod