I have made some minor edits. I also changed one thing which was unclear to me. I stated the log file was located on the USB Drive (I had to look at the BASH script to see whether it went to the USB drive or /var/log on the router).

Again, thanks for the article. It is really great.

Rod

On 11/13/2014 08:38 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:

Hi Rod

It would be very cool if you "translate" it from "german english" to "american english".

Daniel

Am 12.11.2014 um 23:39 schrieb R. W. Rodolico:

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Daniel,

This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in the future.

I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write

"IPFire shall generate an automatic" as "IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"

It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it, then let you know when I'm done.

NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article is clear as is.

Rod

On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:

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Hi I've overworked these parts of the wiki. Could someone please review it?

http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start

http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start

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