From mboxrd@z Thu Jan  1 00:00:00 1970
From: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
To: development@lists.ipfire.org
Subject:
 [PATCH 3/7] man: Fix spelling, wording and formatting of nitsi.settings.5
Date: Fri, 18 May 2018 14:33:55 +0100
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Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer(a)ipfire.org>
---
 man/nitsi.settings.xml | 58 +++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 26 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/nitsi.settings.xml b/man/nitsi.settings.xml
index 8323044d2bee..588a667cac0d 100644
--- a/man/nitsi.settings.xml
+++ b/man/nitsi.settings.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
=20
 	<refnamediv>
 		<refname>nitsi.settings</refname>
-		<refpurpose>Settings file for a nitsi test</refpurpose>
+		<refpurpose>Settings file for a NITSI test</refpurpose>
 	</refnamediv>
=20
=20
@@ -32,16 +32,16 @@
 		<title>Description</title>
=20
 		<para>
-			The <filename>settings</filename> file is the main configuration file of =
the
-			<command>nitsi</command> test.
-			This file specifies runtime configuration parameters for the test
-			and set the virtual environment to use.
+			The <filename>settings</filename> file is the main configuration file
+			of a <command>nitsi</command> test.
+			It specifies runtime configuration parameters for the test
+			and defines the virtual environment to be used.
 		</para>
=20
 		<para>
 			The syntax of the configuration file is based on the INI configuration
-			file format. Lines starting with hash (#) or semi-colon (;)
-			are ignored.
+			file format.
+			Lines starting with hash (#) or semi-colon (;) are comments.
 		</para>
 	</refsect1>
=20
@@ -55,57 +55,54 @@
 		<variablelist>
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>Name =3D ""</option>
+					<option>Name</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
 						This option will configure the name of the test
-						and can be something more human readbale then the name of the test dir=
ectory.
+						and should be in human-readable format.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
=20
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>Description =3D ""</option>
+					<option>Description</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						This can be a short description of the test to explain
-						what we are trying to test and what results we expect when
-						we are running the recipe. So when do the test succeed and when do the=
 test fails.
+						A short short description of the test to explain
+						what it is trying to test and what results are expected when
+						running the recipe.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
=20
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>Copy_from =3D ""</option>
+					<option>Copy_from</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The files or directories which should be copied into all virtual machi=
nes.
-						The paths are relativ to the path of the test directory.
+						Lists files or directories which should be copied into
+						all virtual machines.
+						The paths are relative to the path of the test directory.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
=20
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>Copy_to =3D ""</option>
+					<option>Copy_to</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The path to which the files should be copied. For example /root/
+						The path to which the files should be copied. For example /root.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
=20
@@ -122,27 +119,26 @@
 		<variablelist>
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>Name =3D ""</option>
+					<option>Name</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The Name of the virtual environment to use.
+						The name of the virtual environment to use.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
=20
-					<varlistentry>
+			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<option>path =3D ""</option>
+					<option>path</option>
 				</term>
=20
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The path of the virtual environment relativ to the path of the test.
+						The path of the virtual environment relative to
+						the path of the test directory.
 					</para>
-
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
 		</variablelist>
@@ -156,8 +152,7 @@
 			<simplelist>
 				<member>[DEFAULT]</member>
 				<member>Name =3D Hello World</member>
-				<member>Description =3D This is a
-    				short description.</member>
+				<member>Description =3D This is a short description.</member>
 				<member>Copy_from =3D</member>
 				<member>Copy_to =3D /root/</member>
 				<member>[VIRTUAL_ENVIRONMENT]</member>
@@ -165,7 +160,6 @@
 				<member>path =3D ../virtual-environment/basic</member>
 			</simplelist>
 		</example>
-
 	</refsect1>
=20
 	<refsect1>
--=20
2.17.0


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