Hi,
I looked through all three pages and corrected a few typos and minor mistakes. I think this should be clear for novices too.

You are right, the installation page is very long. Since my holiday is ending, I do not have time to work on it at the moment :-(

Why have you dropped the column "who is currently working on this page"? 

Regards,
Karl

----- Ursprüngliche Mail -----
> Hey,
> 
> so, this is the first try to get things down by the rules of the new
> wiki workflow [1].
> 
> As far as I can see you guys have been working on the DNS forwarding
> docs and wireless client docs. I would also like to add the
> documentation about the new Tor addon, which will be released to
> testers
> very shortly.
> 
> All three of those are pretty advanced as far as I can see, so that we
> can skip the first week of the schedule where we write things from
> scratch. This is already done.
> 
> Let's directly move on to week number two, were we review what has
> been
> done. What I want you to do now is to check if there is everything on
> the pages you definitely need to know. Is a novice user able to set up
> the add-on with the information that is provided on the pages? Set up
> a
> clean installation of IPFire and work through the guide step by step
> and
> check if it works. If so, great! If not, please add the required
> information and leaves us a note.
> 
> If you have some bigger chances, please discuss them with the other
> guys
> first. Please only use the lists for discussions that nobody is left
> out.
> 
> It would be great if the native speakers could check the spelling and
> grammar.
> 
> Getting all three guides done until the end of the week would make me
> really happy.
> 
> If you have some spare time, please have a look at the new TODO list I
> set up in the international area of the wiki [5]. There is a section
> where you can add pages that need to be improved. There is also one
> entry by me. This is the list of features we will work on in the next
> week.
> 
> We also don't care about the translation of these pages, yet.
> 
> Now, let's start!
> 
> -Michael
> 
> P.S. The Tor add-on is not available in the testing tree, yet. You
> will
> be able to install it by the end of the weekend. So if you need that
> to
> review the Tor documentation, please be patient and start with one of
> the others first.
> 
> [1] http://wiki.ipfire.org/projects/docs/workflow
> [2] http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/configuration/network/dnsforward
> [3] http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/configuration/system/wlanclient
> [4] http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/addons/tor/start
> [5] http://wiki.ipfire.org/todo
> 
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