Hi Daniel,

I have read through both Versions and think they are OK. I have not tried to install and test if it works!

The only I thing I did not like is the title. To me it says that a backup of IPfire is done, where it only copies files to the disk.
So I would suggest to name the wiki-article something like:
"start copying to external USB-drive automaticly"
"Automatisch startender Kopiervorgang auf externe USB-Festplatte"

although I have no use for it at the moment, I think it is a nice idea. You describe it in simple words, so everybody should know how to do it.

Thank You for your work. Best regards,
Karl



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> Hi
> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
> Could someone please review it?
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> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
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> thx
> Daniel
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