Hi Karl

Thank you for reviewing.
Please answer next time to the doculist and not directly to me. ;)

Fell free to change the title! I just edited the script because the old 
one didn't work.

-
Daniel

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Am 12.11.2014 um 23:13 schrieb Daniel Weismüller:
>
>
> Hi Daniel,
>
> I have read through both Versions and think they are OK. I have not 
> tried to install and test if it works!
>
> The only I thing I did not like is the title. To me it says that a 
> backup of IPfire is done, where it only copies files to the disk.
> So I would suggest to name the wiki-article something like:
> "start copying to external USB-drive automaticly"
> "Automatisch startender Kopiervorgang auf externe USB-Festplatte"
>
> although I have no use for it at the moment, I think it is a nice 
> idea. You describe it in simple words, so everybody should know how to 
> do it.
>
> Thank You for your work. Best regards,
> Karl
>
>
>
> ----- Ursprüngliche Mail -----
>> Hi
>> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
>> Could someone please review it?
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> thx
>> Daniel
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