From: "R. W. Rodolico" <rodo@dailydata.net>
To: documentation@lists.ipfire.org
Subject: Re: Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk
Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2014 16:39:54 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <5463E1BA.90400@dailydata.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <54634A8E.5080604@ipfire.org>
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Daniel,
This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
the future.
I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write
"IPFire shall generate an automatic"
as
"IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"
It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
then let you know when I'm done.
NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
is clear as is.
Rod
On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
> Hi
> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
> Could someone please review it?
>
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>
> thx
> Daniel
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2014-11-12 11:54 Daniel Weismüller
2014-11-12 22:39 ` R. W. Rodolico [this message]
2014-11-13 14:38 ` Daniel Weismüller
2014-11-13 21:09 ` R. W. Rodolico
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