Daniel,

This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
the future.

I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write

"IPFire shall generate an automatic"
as
"IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"

It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
then let you know when I'm done.

NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
is clear as is.

Rod

On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
> Hi
> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
> Could someone please review it?
> 
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
> 
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
> 
> thx
> Daniel
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