Hi Rod

It would be very cool if you "translate" it from "german english" to 
"american english".

-
Daniel


Am 12.11.2014 um 23:39 schrieb R. W. Rodolico:
> Daniel,
>
> This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
> the future.
>
> I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
> differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write
>
> "IPFire shall generate an automatic"
> as
> "IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"
>
> It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
> least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
> so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
> then let you know when I'm done.
>
> NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
> way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
> is clear as is.
>
> Rod
>
> On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
>> Hi
>> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
>> Could someone please review it?
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> thx
>> Daniel
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