Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk

Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk

[Daniel Weismüller]

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Hi
I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
Could someone please review it?

http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start

http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start

thx
Daniel

Re: Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk

[R. W. Rodolico]

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Daniel,

This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
the future.

I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write

"IPFire shall generate an automatic"
as
"IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"

It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
then let you know when I'm done.

NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
is clear as is.

Rod

On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
> Hi
> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
> Could someone please review it?
> 
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
> 
> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
> 
> thx
> Daniel
> _______________________________________________
> Documentation mailing list
> Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org
> http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation

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Dallas TX 75214-0465
214.827.2170
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Re: Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk

[Daniel Weismüller]

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Hi Rod

It would be very cool if you "translate" it from "german english" to 
"american english".

-
Daniel


Am 12.11.2014 um 23:39 schrieb R. W. Rodolico:
> Daniel,
>
> This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
> the future.
>
> I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
> differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write
>
> "IPFire shall generate an automatic"
> as
> "IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"
>
> It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
> least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
> so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
> then let you know when I'm done.
>
> NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
> way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
> is clear as is.
>
> Rod
>
> On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
>> Hi
>> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
>> Could someone please review it?
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>
>> thx
>> Daniel
>> _______________________________________________
>> Documentation mailing list
>> Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org
>> http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation

Re: Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk

[R. W. Rodolico]

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I have made some minor edits. I also changed one thing which was unclear
to me. I stated the log file was located on the USB Drive (I had to look
at the BASH script to see whether it went to the USB drive or /var/log
on the router).

Again, thanks for the article. It is really great.

Rod

On 11/13/2014 08:38 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
> Hi Rod
> 
> It would be very cool if you "translate" it from "german english" to
> "american english".
> 
> -
> Daniel
> 
> 
> Am 12.11.2014 um 23:39 schrieb R. W. Rodolico:
>> Daniel,
>>
>> This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in
>> the future.
>>
>> I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said
>> differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write
>>
>> "IPFire shall generate an automatic"
>> as
>> "IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic"
>>
>> It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at
>> least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If
>> so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it,
>> then let you know when I'm done.
>>
>> NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the
>> way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article
>> is clear as is.
>>
>> Rod
>>
>> On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote:
>>> Hi
>>> I've overworked these parts of the wiki.
>>> Could someone please review it?
>>>
>>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>>
>>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start
>>>
>>> thx
>>> Daniel
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Documentation mailing list
>>> Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org
>>> http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation
> 
> _______________________________________________
> Documentation mailing list
> Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org
> http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation

-- 
"Rod" Rodolico
Daily Data, Inc.
POB 140465
Dallas TX 75214-0465
214.827.2170
http://www.dailydata.net