From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: "R. W. Rodolico" To: documentation@lists.ipfire.org Subject: Re: Automatic backup of IPFire on an external USB-harddisk Date: Thu, 13 Nov 2014 15:09:55 -0600 Message-ID: <54651E23.9000106@dailydata.net> In-Reply-To: <5464C257.4030805@ipfire.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="===============3693039617976757995==" List-Id: --===============3693039617976757995== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I have made some minor edits. I also changed one thing which was unclear to me. I stated the log file was located on the USB Drive (I had to look at the BASH script to see whether it went to the USB drive or /var/log on the router). Again, thanks for the article. It is really great. Rod On 11/13/2014 08:38 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote: > Hi Rod > > It would be very cool if you "translate" it from "german english" to > "american english". > > - > Daniel > > > Am 12.11.2014 um 23:39 schrieb R. W. Rodolico: >> Daniel, >> >> This looks like a very cool article. I will definitely be trying it in >> the future. >> >> I see a few things in the writing of the English part that would be said >> differently, at least in American English. For example, I would write >> >> "IPFire shall generate an automatic" >> as >> "IPFire can be set up to generate an automatic" >> >> It is just little stuff like that sound sounds a little different, at >> least to an American English speaker. Do you want those changes made? If >> so, I can either send you a list of my suggestions or go in and do it, >> then let you know when I'm done. >> >> NOTE: The article is great. I'm just talking about English grammar the >> way I use it. If you want it left alone, I'm fine with that. The article >> is clear as is. >> >> Rod >> >> On 11/12/2014 05:54 AM, Daniel Weismüller wrote: >>> Hi >>> I've overworked these parts of the wiki. >>> Could someone please review it? >>> >>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/usb-harddisk/start >>> >>> http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/usb-harddisk/start >>> >>> thx >>> Daniel >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Documentation mailing list >>> Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org >>> http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation > > _______________________________________________ > Documentation mailing list > Documentation(a)lists.ipfire.org > http://lists.ipfire.org/mailman/listinfo/documentation -- "Rod" Rodolico Daily Data, Inc. POB 140465 Dallas TX 75214-0465 214.827.2170 http://www.dailydata.net --===============3693039617976757995==--