Hi Luke,
thanks for your response. The whole content should be overviewed thinks so. This was only an example of how the new structure could looks like. Also it was important for me to get some feedback, which seems to be greatly rare at this time (may too good weather ;-) . 

I will go for an english example in the next days when the actual work is done. Will inform you then over the list.

Greetings

Erik


Am 03.08.2013 um 01:18 schrieb Luke Lawry:

Here goes my first email to this group.  

@Erik K.

This change certainly looks cleaner and less cluttered than the old one.

One thing that I would change is the description of the different options. 

For example, "System" is described as "What is under the System Tab can be found here." (english translation) 

Why not use the old description of "Here you will find basic settings that affect the IPFire itself." which seems less redundant.  Putting the description on the first page will keep people from having to click on things in order to see what's inside.

If you have an english version I would like to take a look at it and maybe add some stuff.

Greetings,

 Luke
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