hi there, i did some first corrections in the english version - only grammar, no technical stuff
cheers Heisenberg
2012/1/19 Michael Tremer michael.tremer@ipfire.org
Hello Erik,
well done as far as I can see although there are missing some things in my opinion.
A more detailed introduction and motivation why to do that? It is not quite clear.
The guide is dangerous, one could seriously crash the system. You should mention that once but do not use too many of those notification bubbles. They make the text hard to read.
You used images in JPEG format.
Why do not mount it directly to /var/log? The symlink may cause some trouble.
Michael
On Thu, 2012-01-19 at 08:50 +0100, Erik K. wrote:
Hi all, i want to inform you about a new optimization wiki in german -->
http://wiki.ipfire.org/de/optimization/transfer_logs/start and in english --> http://wiki.ipfire.org/en/optimization/transfer_logs/start .
It might be nice if you can go for a correctional reading and also a
technical check out for it.
Thanks in advance
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