@Michael: I will regard only the english language in the future
1) referring to your comments (thanks for response) i changed the headlines and made them shorter, so they aren´t broken anymore and all are now in one line. 2) I changed the OpenVPN start site and made them smaller so it is a better overview and not so much information in it. Also i removed the Wikipedia links. 3) Also i gave the smartphone section on = more so that there are a TOC to be seen.
Let´s have another look to check this version out.
If this design and content goes the right direction i will adapt this also in the english Wiki.
Thanks and best regards
Erik
@Erik: The official language of this list is English.
Back on topic: I just skimmed over the text. The layout (mainly the headlines) are broken on nearly every page. If that is fixed, the layout would be a bit better and the TOC will show some useful stuff.
On the one hand, texts look complete and there is a lot of information in it but on the other hand the first paragraph on the start page is very long and containing some links to Wikipedia, which in my opinion do not have any relevance to the topic. I would like to see that a bit shorter and with not so much irrelevant information.
Good job.
Michael
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